It was ok.
That main beat is WAY to rushed. Like that ruined the flow and song for me. Also you should have it quiet down instead of just stop so abruptly. As well as it starting so so quickly. Its just kind of like oh hey guys sup. ANd i dont want to be a jerk but i have to stress the rushing.
thanks for the input
um did you still this from somone?
unless you are Familyjules7x from youtube you stole the guitar...... >.>
....alright, you got me. I didn't want people to know this, but back in 2010, I successfully developed a time machine. I then advanced one year into the future, somehow seperated the guitar tracks from some guys youtube video, stored the data on an SD card, went BACK one year, then drummed and played keyboards and bass to that guitar track.
Although completely capable, I was just feeling really lazy that day and didn't want to lay down my own guitar tracks. Ya know?
Plus time travel is fun.
TL;DR: I'm afriad not, my son. Perhaps you should take a look at the submission dates.
The beat and sounds had my brain and ears confused as to what to listen for but it is a very nice touch i really like this and to categorize i would say abstract to say the least but still i love it
There were a few problems like there was no real climax in the piece like there should be in any instrumental piece it was just kinda mellow and soft throughout and oyu don't want that. what you want is ist to be mellow and quiet and then wither gradually or suddenly become more massive and loud but good work
I'll be sure to keep that in mind :)
Lyrics in case you would want them
Who took the cookie from the cookie jar?
Eric! took the cookie from the cookie jar!
Who me? Yes you! Couldn't be. Then who?
John! took the cookie from the cookie jar.
*laugh*Who me? Yes You! Fuck they found out!
*noises of crazy man sealing cookie from daycare*
makes me feel like i am on a very distant planet and actually you could perceive this song as an organism i mean the very withstanding drum beat in the background would be its heartbeat and its origin and as you continue to add more and instruments to the piece the organism evolves and lives and then eventually as the piece of music slow the organism begins to slow all its life cycles until eventually it dies which isn't a bad thing because as it looks up it sees the lights of the heavens and embraces death like a warm sheet of bliss and pure happiness in its afterlife because it knows that its time on its planet is over ........
The original itself is amazing enough but this is just the original...... already one of my favorite songs of all times and really just 1upping it to make this true piece of music..... no this is art to me in a piece of music that truly makes me feel entirely better considering what an awful month i have had just beyond words thank you so much and in all honesty in this piece you have saved a life........ i almost went and did something stupid thankyou so so much i cant even begin to describe my thanks and the beauty of this song quiet possibly my favorite piece on this sight just simply perfect i could want no more in a song and unlike most songs it doesnt just sound beautiful it actually moves me which is very hard to do thankyou for creating this masterpiece and putting it here for me to simply enjoy you deserve the highest honor
Wow, I am truly moved by your statement.
This is really nice
it has a great sort of flow to it sounfs like a video game almost please continue to make music on ng
I'm usually not into lyrical songs on NG, but this.... this is really just in all fact a great song you should continue making music and maybe to get more recognition just put a simple beat down wiht no words
this is only my 3rd lyrical song. the rest of them are just beats. i dont get recognition because I always get z-bombed to hell. this song prolly will get bombed soon too :/
5/5 and you should....
animate all the characters from larry singing this it would be amazing
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